We've moved on now from our 'Magic Box Stories'. We learned so much by working independently and with our writing partners, and by peer and self assessing our completed work. We each completed our own self-made '2 stars and a wish' comment sheets and the stories and comments were shared with the parents during our recent 'Parent Nights' on Wednesday and Thursday of this week.
'Magic Box' Comments
Here are the comments we received about our 'Magic Box' stories. We think Harry posted all the way from Australia! Neil is Mrs V's (class teach) son, who logged onto our blog from Manchester. What a great comment about the 'Movie Trailer' interviews ........ and Happy Birthday today, Neil!!!
At 08 November, 2006, Harry said...
Magic Box... It sounds very interesting, but I was wondering what the story "Magic Box" is about?
At 08 November, 2006, p7 teach said...
Hello Harry,It's about whatever the pupils in my class want it to be about! Check out our writing spaces link if you like - the stories are all very different!
At 16 November, 2006, Neil said...
Hi! I'm really impressed with this creative writing idea. It's great how many different stories can come from the same title. I also like the interview - it's like a movie trailer to get you interested in the story.
'Magic Box' Comments
Here are the comments we received about our 'Magic Box' stories. We think Harry posted all the way from Australia! Neil is Mrs V's (class teach) son, who logged onto our blog from Manchester. What a great comment about the 'Movie Trailer' interviews ........ and Happy Birthday today, Neil!!!
At 08 November, 2006, Harry said...
Magic Box... It sounds very interesting, but I was wondering what the story "Magic Box" is about?
At 08 November, 2006, p7 teach said...
Hello Harry,It's about whatever the pupils in my class want it to be about! Check out our writing spaces link if you like - the stories are all very different!
At 16 November, 2006, Neil said...
Hi! I'm really impressed with this creative writing idea. It's great how many different stories can come from the same title. I also like the interview - it's like a movie trailer to get you interested in the story.
You can also check out the comments made by our friends in Australia recently P5/6 Allstars !!
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Hello Carronshore - your work looks fantastic!
We like your ideas on improving writing and problem solving and have put a link to them on our site so that we can learn from your ideas.
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