Here are the comments that Lisa put on her page:
"2 stars and a wish is , 2 good polite comments on their
piece of writing and a thing you think they should try and improve on. My class
use this on all our writing and work with a friend . The 2 stars and a wish idea
is great it helps you be truthful and honest with your friends and you won't
feel bad. My class have designed our own layout of 2 stars and a wish , we drew
2 stars and some to do with a wish and what we do is write in them. I think all
schools should use this idea .It will help the class co-operate together. We
also talk to the class about the persons work so it's like a little
presentation."
She also commented on some writing using '2 stars and a wish'
Jamie has started a fantastic thriller like story 'please read
- Star 1~ Fantastic description and detail well done
- Star 2~ Brilliant use of detailed words great start
- My wish ~ FINISH IT (because its superb)
1 comment:
I really like your blog. The children's stories are super so far. I'm looking forward to reading some more!
Rosemary Q
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